WELCOME TO YOUR FIRST 100 WORD CHALLENGE ELI!
Then everything stopped and I could hear her singing in the dark.
I tried to stay silent, but I stepped on a rock. I heard her running full speed towards me, and I started to bolt for the door. She was really fast for being small, but I was faster.
As I burst through the door I can hear the city come to life, but she was chasing me so I get in my car, and I drive as fast as I can home.
I saw on the news that she has been caught. Thank goodness that ordeal is over.
Wow well done Eli that’s great work for your 1st 100 word challenge.
Wow Eli! I never knew you were such a great writer, your writing was amazing.
It reminds me of a horror movie, and your writing makes the situation very effective and surreal.
I can’t wait to read your next 100 WC!
– Sophie K 🙂
Welcome to our 100WC family Eli.
You’ve chosen a great concept for this prompt and I can feel the urgency of the situation in your writing.
If you look at your ‘burst through the door’ paragraph, you’ll see that you are swapping tenses from past to present. I’m sure you’ll keep an eye out for this next time you write.
Thanks for sharing,
Jackie (Team 100WC)
New Plymouth