Isla’s family loves hunting -how can she manage to include vinegar in her 100 Word Challenge?

I am out hunting with Dad and Joe, staying a night at dads friends place in one of the huts.

It’s dusk and we just came back from hunting. I ask dad if we can make tea now.

He says “yes well, I hope you like homemade fish ‘n chips with some vinegar on the side.”

“ What? Vinegar! That’s crazy why would you have vinegar on your fish and chips?”

Dad suggested to me, ”just try it.”

And I did.

We cooked the fish.

”Hand me the vinegar dad. OMG this VINEGAR IS TOO SHARP! GET ME WATER – HURRY! QUICK!”

Isla

2 thoughts on “Isla’s family loves hunting -how can she manage to include vinegar in her 100 Word Challenge?

  1. Amazing 100 Word Challenge Isla!
    I like how at the end you yelled out “OMG this VINEGAR IS TOO SHARP! GET ME WATER – HURRY! QUICK!”. Keep up the great work!

    Olivia Williams
    Ashley School

  2. Wow Isla I loved it. You had great punctuation and good adjectives. I also loved where you put

    THE VINEGAR IS TOO SHARP.

    It was well put together I thought.

    OLIVIA.T.

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