Isla’s family loves hunting -how can she manage to include vinegar in her 100 Word Challenge?
I am out hunting with Dad and Joe, staying a night at dads friends place in one of the huts.
It’s dusk and we just came back from hunting. I ask dad if we can make tea now.
He says “yes well, I hope you like homemade fish ‘n chips with some vinegar on the side.”
“ What? Vinegar! That’s crazy why would you have vinegar on your fish and chips?”
Dad suggested to me, ”just try it.”
And I did.
We cooked the fish.
”Hand me the vinegar dad. OMG this VINEGAR IS TOO SHARP! GET ME WATER – HURRY! QUICK!”
Isla
Amazing 100 Word Challenge Isla!
I like how at the end you yelled out “OMG this VINEGAR IS TOO SHARP! GET ME WATER – HURRY! QUICK!”. Keep up the great work!
Olivia Williams
Ashley School
Wow Isla I loved it. You had great punctuation and good adjectives. I also loved where you put
THE VINEGAR IS TOO SHARP.
It was well put together I thought.
OLIVIA.T.