Olivia T thinks the vinegar is too sharp!

I am walking and walking barely being able to stand how cold the water is. I walk and walk as it gets colder and colder every step I take I can’t stand it anymore I sprit out of the water.

I walk into the forest but the forest ends and it goes completely white all I see is a man walking towards me I am scared is he going to kidnap me instead he offers me a bag of chips. I think the chips look dodgy but I eat one anyway but the vinegar is too sharp I suddenly collapse.

Olivia T

3 thoughts on “Olivia T thinks the vinegar is too sharp!

  1. Magnificent story Olivia. Very intriguing to read. I would love to know what happens next! Great job!

    Olivia Williams
    Ashley School

  2. You got me hooked! That is what you call a great ‘flash fiction’ story .. love it.
    Cheers Monique from Wellington.
    (Studied photography with your Ma )

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