100 Word Challenge Term 2 Week 2. 5 words: BROWN MELTED SALT GIRAFFE GREASY

Dave has been through the drafting and editing process to complete this week’s 100 Word Challenge. Each writer had to use the words at the top of this piece by Dave.

As I move through the tall grass my body feels like it’s melted till I’m stopped in my tracks. I am surprised to see a waterhole and to my luck there was just a giraffe.

I rush to the waterhole but I am slowed down due to the brown mud. I keep walking and make it to the waterhole it tasted like salt. I see a log and decide to sit on it but it feels a bit greasy till I realise it’s a CROCODILE! I was so agitated that I ran into the waterhole without hesitation.

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