Ciara’s 100 Word Challenge – Gerald just couldn’t stop laughing….

“I can see you!” said the text. I looked around nervously.

Not knowing what to do I turned to my accomplice Gerald.

“We need to get out of here!” I exclaimed.

When Gerald turned to face me he was hysterically laughing, his mouth and eyes were peeled open as if he had seen a ghost. Gerald just couldn’t stop laughing. I leisurely backed away.

“STOP!” he yelled.

I froze, in that moment I wanted to sink into the cold wet floor. I bolted out of the room like Superman, my head starting to spin and everything around me going black.

2 thoughts on “Ciara’s 100 Word Challenge – Gerald just couldn’t stop laughing….

  1. Hi Ciara

    This piece of writing is really good. You have left me hanging because i want to know what happens next.
    It is very descriptive you have used punctuation and have hooked me in from the very start.
    I am looking forward to your next 100 word challenge.

  2. Incredible 100 Word Challenge Ciara. It was very intriguing to read and great vocabulary. Extremely descriptive and lots of punctuation. I would love to know more of the story, maybe you can write a part two!


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