Ciara’s 100 Word Challenge – Gerald just couldn’t stop laughing….
“I can see you!” said the text. I looked around nervously.
Not knowing what to do I turned to my accomplice Gerald.
“We need to get out of here!” I exclaimed.
When Gerald turned to face me he was hysterically laughing, his mouth and eyes were peeled open as if he had seen a ghost. Gerald just couldn’t stop laughing. I leisurely backed away.
“STOP!” he yelled.
I froze, in that moment I wanted to sink into the cold wet floor. I bolted out of the room like Superman, my head starting to spin and everything around me going black.
Hi Ciara
This piece of writing is really good. You have left me hanging because i want to know what happens next.
It is very descriptive you have used punctuation and have hooked me in from the very start.
I am looking forward to your next 100 word challenge.
Incredible 100 Word Challenge Ciara. It was very intriguing to read and great vocabulary. Extremely descriptive and lots of punctuation. I would love to know more of the story, maybe you can write a part two!
Olivia