ISLA’S 100 WC ABOUT THE MOON

rakau20 August 3, 2019 ISLA’S 100 WC ABOUT THE MOON2019-08-03T22:32:08+00:00 100 WORD CHALLENGE 1 Comment

As we are walking though the tall wavy grass, he says to me, ‘lets lie down and look at the moon and stars.’

We lie there for a while and then all of a sudden I hear this one big SNORE!

It gave me such a fright, I leapt up and screamed, but then I realised it was him!

I lay back down and then a thought came into my mind. We should take a photo of him “holding the moon”.

I quickly wake him up and I told him everything. We took the photos and here’s one of them.

Cath (Team100, Melbourne, Australia) - August 7th, 2019 at 10:09 am none Comment author #90 on ISLA’S 100 WC ABOUT THE MOON by RAKAU in 2021

Hello Isla, I enjoyed reading your story. I like how you started with having your characters looking up at the stars and the moon. It is such a wonderful thing to do. I also like how you then added some excitement into the story by the snore creating fright and then the excitement of capturing the moment with the moon. Well done.

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