Connor P – 100 Word Challenge…it relates to our read-aloud book this term – After by Morris Gleitzman.

In 1944 in the war-torn capital city of Poland, war rages on as usual. Cities crumpling from bombs and bullets, people dead of bullet wounds, but that’s still not enough. Cold and hungry, I head to the big city, or what’s remaining of it, to get some well deserved food. I heard them before I saw them, Nazi war planes, Stukas, dropping bombs.  

Then,  BOOM! 

Another city demolished, another thousand people killed and the most important thing, my food has been destroyed! 

All in a day’s work in the life of Nazis in the dark times of World War Two.  

One thought on “Connor P – 100 Word Challenge…it relates to our read-aloud book this term – After by Morris Gleitzman.

  1. To Connor,
    I love the way that you have related your writing to your shared book – reading and writing should be linked and my class do this sometimes too.
    Nice work paragraphing of your writing too.
    Keep up the great writing.
    Mrs Horan
    Team 100WC
    Morrinsville, New Zealand.

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