HUNTER’S 100 WC LINKS TO OUR CLASS STORY.
“The Nazis are coming!” I hear them shout. I crawl out of my hiding space to see what is happening.
“There,” I mumble to myself. I hear them before I see them, then, in the distance, I sight the Nazis.
“Where are they going?” I think.
I start following them to see, but someone turns around and sees me. I start running as he starts shooting.
“There they are!” I shout. I crouch down but he’s still coming for me.
“Why me?” I shout to him. There’s no answer, so I keep running.
This is the end – it has come.
Hi Hunter
What a fabulous 100WC. You have used punctuation properly which makes it very easy for the reader to understand what you have written. Your writing is paced well and flows nicely. Well done.
Mrs P (Team 100WC)
Wellington, New Zealand