BELLA HAS HAD A PURPLE AVOCADO!
I went to the zoo on a fine, hot, sunny day. Then the strangest most unusual thing happened.
When I walked into the zoo my bones shivered as if I knew something dreadful was going to happen. Earlier that day this old lady gave me a purple avocado and she said “This purple avocado will change your life
forever,” then I went home and ate it. I didn’t think about the purple avocado until later that day.
It was while I was looking at an elephant I felt myself shrinking into the size of the smallest seahorse in the world.
Dear Bella,
I thought your story was amazing! The way you used the words given was very different than others, and it made the story more interesting!
From,
Eileen, Grade 5, Illinois, USA