OLIVIA T IS AT THE BEACH.
I ate my avocado and chicken sandwich on the way to the beach, it was delicious, until I came across two chicken bones. “EWWWW!” I say.
“What’s wrong?” my mother asks.
“There were bones in my sandwich,” I say like a brat.
“Oops sorry sweetie,” my mum says.
“It’s okay,” I say. .
When we get to the beach, I put on my elephant swimming togs and sprint into the water.
I see purple seashells in the water – they are so pretty.
When I have had enough swimming I make a seahorse sandcastle.
I hear the waves crashing on the sand.
Nice work Olivia! You did well to pull those interesting words together into your story. I got a giggle out of one part in particular. I wonder what part that was? 😉