EDEN 100 WC
The fresh air, the soft sand, everything you could expect at a beach party. Loud music rings in your ears as you drink the sweet taste of fizzy. I’m having a great time dancing to my heart’s content.
My friends and I head to the water seeing the shiny waves upon me just makes me smile, then suddenly I hear what my friends were talking about. Then everything stopped and I was shocked – mostly frozen from what I have just heard.
I think a while, then I say softly, “if you are my true friends, then you wouldn’t say that.”
Hi Eden. Well done, I really enjoyed reading your 100 Word Challenge. It made me think about how hurtful words can be. You have done a great job of setting the scene and creating atmosphere, and your word choices add detail that make your writing extra special. Loved it Eden, keep on writing!
Thank you I would love to see your blog if you have one.