Oh no Dave!

It was the most frightening sound of all time. My dad had let out a humungous fart in the car. I then realised it was just my brother playing with his balloon. That was close because my dad’s farts are a force to be reckoned with, but at least I have these phenomenal brown chocolate muffins.

OH NO! It’s that noise again. My dad has really let out an abounding load and its disgusting.  I’ve never smelt anything like it. It smelt like poop and socks combined? I kicked the air as I blocked my nose from the atrocious smell.

2 thoughts on “Oh no Dave!

  1. Oh Dave how awful to be trapped in a car with a terrible smell! I love the humour in your 100WC. You have used the words in a really natural, and funny way. Well done.

    Mrs P (Team 100WC)
    Wellington, New Zealand

  2. Great story! While being really funny, it uses all the vocabulary words smoothly. Keep it up!

    Aidan, Grade 5, Illinois, USA

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