ISRAEL REMEMBERS THE WAR WITH OUR RED PROMPT

RED                                           

The colour of the thick red blood makes me sick to my core, but yet I am determined to win this war. 

My ears deafened as the shots zoom past my face,  penetrating the air. 

I fall to the ground with an excruciating pain in my leg. I scream in agony and look back with hesitance.

I see a stream of dark red blood seeping out of my leg, I get up with grit and adrenaline, but fall straight back down with a SMACK! 

My vision goes blurry from the vile smelling sweat dripping off my forehead into my eyes.

One thought on “ISRAEL REMEMBERS THE WAR WITH OUR RED PROMPT

  1. I really like your use of imagery and the way you used the prompt but I think that maybe you should show what’s going on around your character. Maybe other people are running away or something similar. Other than that, good job!

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