MAISY IS IN TROUBLE!

Screaming kids everywhere, death lurked in every doorway, my hair stood on end, a shiver raced down my spine. 

This time he wouldn’t forgive easily, I had cheated death once before, but now it seemed almost inescapable.

I had to hide, but where would I go? 

I quickly took cover behind a bright RED dumpster. He would never find me… or so I thought. 

Unexpectedly the group of screaming kids ran past me. I let out a startled shriek, that’s when he knew where I was hiding. Terror rushed through my body like a waterfall.  

I WAS ABOUT TO DIE…

One thought on “MAISY IS IN TROUBLE!

  1. Hi Maisy I have to be honest your story is a little scary, but it was really well written and I liked it. There where lots of well thought out adjectives and your story was well put together good job.

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