OH NO! CONNOR’S CURRY HAS NOT GONE DOWN WELL!

“Finally,” I exclaimed as my tummy starts to rumble as if it was a gigantic hippo burping, “FOOD, CURRY!” 

As I heap the incredibly spicy vindaloo into my mouth like there’s no tomorrow, it hits me. 

“AH!” I scream as I start to chug the most refreshing, delicious, cold milk I have ever tried. Although, never has my food or drink ever missed my mouth so much in my life.

“Oh no,” I explain worriedly as my belly turns loose and my bum starts to turn as red as a blood moon from that scrumptious, yet red hot Indian CURRY!

2 thoughts on “OH NO! CONNOR’S CURRY HAS NOT GONE DOWN WELL!

  1. Hi my name is Karsten from Chicago in the United States. I really enjoyed reading your 100 word challenge, and I also really liked the title. I like how you show how hot and spicy the curry is. You might also improve a little if you add a little dialogue with another person to add a little more drama. Otherwise, your 100 Word Challenge was really good.

  2. Hello. This piece of writing is, um, interesting. On the good side, this piece uses red in a really creative way, with curry and everything. On the bad side though, it kind of rushes the story. Then again, it’s 100 words. Overall, it’s a good story though.

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