A STORY ABOUT SOCKS = BY BELLA
My friends and I like to wear funny looking socks. One of my fabulous friends wears vibrant, purple, eggplant, high socks!
This week my friend turned up looking suspiciously happy.
As she put her violin away, and walked up to me, she threw her leg up on to the table, landing on my newly painted poster for school.
She yelled in excitement “I got brand new socks and look they have cute, baby elephants on them!”
As her friend, I feel as if I have to be excited for her. “OMG, I love them,” I say in a sarcastic tone.
Dear Bella,
I enjoyed reading your story and I like to do weird things with my friends too! In the last part, I could feel for the character because you used a common thing that I feel people feel.
From,
Eileen, Grade 5, Illinois, USA
I liked your use of description in your story. It was very interesting (in a good way) how you based your story on purple socks.