A beautiful story by Amber.
We lost our home, business and nearly one another…
As I looked for work I semi-dozed off. It was winter so my sight was blank at 4:30p.m.
I slowly lay down on the sofa when I got to my cousins house, while I heard my kids playing peacefully on the top floor of their farmhouse.
When I awoke, I was looking at the most wonderful sight, like I had never seen before. A beautiful figure stood in front of me.
It was like an angel sent down as a blessing from God.
I didn’t realise they could fly.
Dear Amber,
I liked how you used the prompt (I didn’t realise they could fly) in a very creative. Your story is very creative and the description made me feel like a saw the angel in real life! Keep on writing!
Sincerely, Samuel
Hi I love your writing and your use of this weeks prompt. Your writing is brilliant and I like it. Well done.
Dear Amber,
I loved the detail you provided in the story! You paint a picture in the reader’s brain, and when I read the words in your story, I felt like I was transported into it! Great job, and keep writing!
Nicholas, Grade 5, Illinois, USA