JORJA-ROSE HAS MADE AN INTERESTING COMPARISON.
As I stare upon the gleaming art at Eureka Tower in Melbourne a burst of memory pops into my head.
“This reminds me of the great hand sculpture by Ronnie Van Hout at the Te Puna O Waiwhetu art gallery in Christchurch,” I thought to myself.
“Gosh these bees are just amazing and immaculate don’t you think?” I say.
“Yes, and you can definitely tell that the Queen bee at the very top rules the crown” my friend from Aussie says. “I wonder who thought of the idea first?”
“New Zealand! >> Australia!” we both say at the exact same time.
Hi Jorja Rose,
Great post! I really like the way you linked the prompt picture to a previous prompt- great idea! Well done on using believable dialogue in your story. But try to avoid using “>>” in your writing unless you’re doing maths! Keep up the good work.
Michael (Team 100wc), Derbyshire, UK
Jorja Rose,
Great story! The definitely is an interesting comparison. What reminded you of the Te Puna O Waiwhetu art gallery?
-Layla, CO
Wow!
Your post had very described words and you only had one mistake, try your best to get to 100 words so try your best to fit in some more words.
Haha! I meant the sculpture in Te Puna O Waiwhetu art gallery!
I like your picture your story was vary interesting.
Hi Jorja Rose,
I liked your post. I liked how you included a lot of talking in your post and how you liked the bees.
Your story was very well written, but I don’t know why you said that New Zealand was better than Australia out of the blue. It just didn’t make sense to me. Other than that it was good.
Dear Jorja Rose,
Hello Jorja Rose! Your 100 word challenge was nicely written, and I enjoyed it a lot! I liked the reference to an art piece, and thought that was very creative. There could be a few more details added here and there, but overall you did a great job!