A STORY OF HOPE FROM TAIDGH
Hundreds of millions of years ago there was a war among the animals of the jungle, there were spotted giraffes, fluorescent pink flamingos, dusty dingoes, and many more.
The war had gone on for seven painful years, the jungle had fallen apart into a deserted barren wasteland. Animals had been wiped out of existence and our precious world was falling apart.
But one day the skies opened up and sang with light upon the fragile land, the many seas of sand turned into vast oceans thriving with life. The world had rebirthed into a new planet rich with flora fauna.
TAIDGH – YEAR 7
Hello Taidgh
I thought this was a great piece of writing because it had lots of great, advanced vocabulary. I also thought that the story had a lot of thought and effort put into it.
From Zak