SOPHIA AND HER FRIENDS WENT HIKING.
PROMPT = …we took no notice of the sign…
It was Sunday. Emily, Saoirse and I planned a hike in the mountains to have a picnic on the top.
Our plans were soon ruined though by a sign that read:
DANGER, BIG SINKHOLES APPEARING.
We were very annoyed but then realised there was no one telling us to go home, so we took no notice of the sign and went in.
It looked perfectly fine. It was a little later that a crack appeared and turned into a sinkhole that sucked up our picnic. We ran out before we fell in. Ever since that day we always obeyed signs.
SOPHIA – YEAR 6
Hi,
My name is Isabelle. I thought your story was amazing. I really liked the tension created when you
wrote about ignoring the sign. I also really liked how at the end you said “ever since that day we always obeyed signs”. Keep up the good work.