GREAT TO SEE MATTHEW AGAIN!
“I’m trying to hold on!’ he shouted, as he was clinging to the car door, after speeding the wrong way, because earlier we had taken no notice of the sign.
We hit the gravel road and spun, side swiping a tree while the back end of the car flung round hanging over the edge of a cliff.
I smelt the fear coming off Ryan as he clung to the door, swinging. I tried my best to move but was frozen, my white knuckles showing as I clung to the steering wheel and the beads of sweat rolling down my face.
MATTHEW = YEAR 8
I like the stunts and cliffhangers in your story.
Good work.
Dear Matthew,
I like the end of your story and how you were frozen in fear as Ryan hung off of the cliff. I also like how you said that you could smell the fear coming off of Ryan.
From,
Devin
Hey Matthew,
I love your story! The suspense is very strong all throughout your story, with the car hanging over the edge of the cliff and the boy barely clinging on! Overall, fantastic story! Keep writing.
Nicholas, Grade 5, Illinois, USA
Dear Matthew,
Great work. I like the adventurous part of your story. Great job.
Sincerely Julia
Wow! This story is incredible, Matthew. I love how you included the character feelings in such detail at the end. This prompt fit in amazingly in your writing!
– Diya, Grade 5, Illinois, USA
Matthew,
Great work this week! I would really enjoy to see another sequel to this. I also really liked how you included the prompt from the previous week. Keep up the good work!
Mathew,
I really liked your story, I liked how you had a lot of details and all the excitement. Also, I liked how you wrote the story. I really liked your post.