ZAK IS IN TROUBLE.
Suddenly I slip. ‘Ahhhhhh!’
I am dangling off the face of a cliff in the middle of nowhere.
“HELP!” I shout to my travel partner.
“I’m trying to hold on,” he shouted.
I look down at the rigid, pointy rocks at the bottom of the cliff, which might soon pierce through my body in a pool of blood. Suddenly my partner shouts that he will let me go, but I hung on. I saw him connect a rope to my harness and pull me up.
‘Thank you,’ I panted.
So, I got to live another day on this adventurous planet.
ZAK – YEAR 7
Hi Zak! Great story! I liked the description about the rocks that you almost fell.
Wow!
I loved your description it was fantastic! It gave me shivers up and down my spine, I felt like in the story it was pretty amazing. All of the 100 WC’s I’ve read, yours is the most descriptive.
Have a great day and keep up your amazing details!