AND IT’S PROMPT NUMBER 1 FOR OLIVIA!
Prompt 1 – “…was this really the only…”
My legs run faster than they ever have before, burning in agonising pain. I look behind me and see that the person in a black cloak is following me.
No! A dead end!
I peer over the edge of the cliff and grit my teeth together, was this really the only way?
I pace backwards and see that the dark figure is getting closer to me, so I run and leap.
SPLASH! I land in a murky cold pond and I stare up to see no one is following anymore.
“Ha!” I say repeatedly in my head, “you scaredy cat!”.
OLIVIA – YEAR 8
Dear Olivia,
I really like your story. I think you incorporated the prompt quite nicely. Keep up the great work!
Devi,
Grade 5, IL, USA