HERE’S ZOE’S FIRST 100 WORD CHALLENGE!
I woke at 7 am like always. Mum, dad and my sister Jemma had disappeared , I looked outside for them…. It was chaos.
The horses, sheep, chickens and cows were everywhere. I slipped on my shoes and ran outside to help. My sister was stuck in a stampede of cows. I didn’t particularly care but I helped her anyway.
We lost one chicken, two teeth (both dads), and Jemma lost the love of cows.
The sun has just gone down on a crazy and eventful day. I wonder what could be hiding in the fog. 
Probably our lost chicken.
ZOE = YEAR 7
Hi Zoe. You’ve written a wonderfully creative and funny story! I really enjoyed reading it – well done. I especially like your insightful phrase ‘Jemma lost the love of cows’! Keep up the excellent writing Zoe.
Dear Zoe,
I loved your story! It made me chuckle. I always love a humorous story! I feel bad that your sister lost the love of cows and your dad lost two teeth! The way you wrote the story made me feel like I was there watching everything. Fantastic job!
Sincerely,
Angelina in 5th grade from Illinois, USA