100 WORD CHALLENGE BY ZAK.
As I walked with my friends down the edge of the dark forest, the sound of gunshots followed by a scream, echoed through the night.
One of my friends murmurs, β well, should we go and help?”
But should I really do this? I think.
βIt could be dangerous,β another one of my friends adds.
β It sounds like someone is in peril,” I say, “we need to do what is right and at least try to help.”
Everyone agreed. So we disappeared into the night. After 10 minutes of walking, we bumped into a dangerous looking man with a loaded shotgun.
You have set the scene really well with your writing here Zak by creating an air of suspense…whats going to happen next??
Hi, Zak.
I really liked how you said, “It sounds like someone is in peril”. You described the story really well.
Joe YR 7 Ashley School.