JAMIE’S 100 WORD CHALLENGE = IT IS EXCITING!
“This is going to be so much fun,” Jake said eagerly.
“Yeah but should we really do it?” asked Max. 
“We’ve already come this far, it’s too late to turn back now,” whispered Noah.
The three boys continued until the place was in sight. “POLICE FIRING RANGE.”
“Awesome” muttered Noah.
“How are we going to get in, it’s locked?”
“Through the vents, ” said Jake.
“ OK then, let’s get to it,” said Noah in an excited tone.
But what happened next was not what anyone expected, so if you want to find out you’ll have to stick around for part two. . .
JAMIE – YEAR 8
Great piece of writing Jamie, you built up the suspense very quickly which means I definitely want to know what happens in Part two. Well done, great use of punctuation too by the way, helped to make sense of your writing.