THE TRAVELER, BY ARABELLA.
…but should I really do this?…
It was 1984. 
Bang, all of a sudden a light shines in my face, I scream.
It was a car which had come out of nowhere that had given me a shock.
“Sorry I was traveling in time,” he explains.
“WHAT!” I yell, “B-b-but that’s impossible”.
“No it isn’t, want a ride so I can show you?”, he says.
“Sure” I say.
‘But should I really do this?’ I think, then a voice in my head says, ‘Do what? Get in a car with a complete stranger to me that only looks nine years old,’ I tell the strange voice.
ARABELLA = YEAR 6
Arabella great writing, I like the way you have used punctuation to help the reader understand the conversations between the characters and how she is arguing with herself in her head. Well done I liked it.
Arabella I liked your conversation with the voice in your head. I found this sentence – “WHAT!” I yell, “B-b-but that’s impossible”. – quite interesting. Good writing.