SOPHIA HAS A TRAVELING 100WC.
‘Surprise! We are all going on a massive holiday to Finland,’ Mum and Dad yell as we walk through the door to their bedroom.
‘How amazing!’ I say, ‘it will be so fun.’
‘Yes, and we leave in three weeks.’
‘HOORAY!’ I yell.
Finally the day came when we were all packed. We walked out the door feeling excited.
We drove in the car for an hour and were about to be on a plane for nine hours to switch planes in Singapore.
We got to our terminal and boarded, then took off and we disappeared into the night sky.
SOPHIA – YEAR 6
That was a truely amazing holiday, I liked the way you ended your story – leaving the reader wanting to hear more, I certainly did.