JOE’S RESPONSE TO HIS OWN PROMPT FOR THE 100WC!
The deafening screams echoed through the cold night.
I heard a panicked voice scream, “Someone has been attacked by the tiger!” I grabbed my gun and headed nervously for the village.
Petrified villagers showed me where it happened, saying the massive tiger fled into the jungle carrying the body.
I walked cautiously into the dense jungle, my loaded gun ready. The man-eating tiger had to be near, the attack had only just happened.
Then from the corner of my eye, I saw the tiger’s fierce blazing eyes staring back at me from beside what looked to be a human body!
JOE – YEAR 7
Hi Joe
This is a magnificent piece of descriptive writing and I really enjoyed the detail you have put into this piece of work. I am looking forward to reading more of your posts in the future.
Lachlan Yr 8 Ashley School