IZAAC HAS A SCARY STORY TO TELL FOR HIS 100WC.
The snow was chilling and was freezing my skin.
They let my sister and I down the mountain, my skis turned sideways causing me to tumble into my sister making us fall down the mountain.
‘Izaac, Ciara watch out!’ my mum shouts.
I look back to see an avalanche heading towards us. “CIARA GO!” I yell, screaming. She started to hop up and help. ‘Forget about me. I’m already stuck in the snow, GO!’
But it was too late. The avalanche was already here.
‘Bye Ciara,’ I said.
‘Bye Izaac,’ Ciara said.
The deafening screams echoed into the cold night.
IZAAC – YEAR 6
Dear Izaac,
I like the story that wrote. You incorporated the prompt into your story very nicely. I also think that your story flows well.
Izaac,
Such a good story! Sometimes we have to make hard decision on that occasion. Keep on writing!
Jp