HERES 100 WORDS FROM SAM!
As the deafening screams echoed through the cold night, I’m sitting in my cold cottage bed slowly falling asleep. I hear the screeching of a mouse being caught by an owl, the cold breeze of the wind, and animals scattering in the leaves.
The following day was even colder than the last. I went outside and there was even frozen squirrels, that’s when I thought I should go back to the cottage and get some warmer clothes. When I got them on, I went back outside to leave.
It turns out that that was the coldest day in the world.
SAM – YEAR 6
Brrr, what a chilly start to the day. At least the owl had a nice warm mouse to nibble on.
Dear Sam,
I really liked how you included the prompt in a way that didn’t really relate to the story. It gave it character, and uniqueness. It also added detail of the eeriness during the story. I like how you made the setting very cold, it made the story feel real, and like I was really there. It added a lot of effect to the story. Why was it so cold? Did something that wasn’t related to the character happen? I really liked this 100WC, please continue to create and share!