TUSHIL’S 100WC FOR THIS WEEK.
My friend Joel bet me and my other friend Izaac 20 dollars if we spent the night in the haunted forest next to his house. So me and Izaac went in with our sleeping bags and a tent, and after talking and playing for a while we got in our sleeping bags and went to sleep.
We woke up in the middle of the night and heard some scary growling noises coming from behind us, so we ran away screaming.
The deafening screams echoed through the cold night. We got to Joel’s house and never went back into the forest.
TUSHIL – YEAR 6
Wow, Tushil, this is a very good reason to go screaming through the forest – I don’t think I would be going back either. You used the sentence very effectively – I like that it wasn’t at the start but later in the story. Keep playing with sentence structures – see if you can put a short and a long sentence next to each other. Thanks for sharing.