Emily’s 100 Word Challenge this week.
It was the afternoon of November the 3rd.
Little Jessie O’Brien was out at a beautiful river playing with Lily the family dog. She looked around and saw a black tree that was leaning over the river. Lily was standing on some rocks that were covered in dry, long grass, next to it.
She looked like she was ready to pounce on a little blue fish that had been swimming around her for the last 15 minutes. Jessie noticed that just in front of the river there is a small snow capped mountain.
Maybe she could go there tomorrow?
EMILY – YEAR 6
You have responded to this picture prompt so well, Emily. You have clearly studied it and used it to paint a picture of the scene in words. I particularly like the phase ‘She looked like she was ready to pounce on a little blue fish’. That describes perfectly what the dog is doing! I also like your description of the rocks with the dry, long grass.