EMILY IS IN A DESERTED MINE.
Prompt: gold viola searched lost ancient
I looked around the deserted mine.
I had searched for days looking for this lost gold my grandpa had been talking about.
I had followed the map.
Suddenly I heard some music, it sounded like it was coming from a viola! I followed the music then found myself looking in a mine cart. No one was in there. I looked around and saw a shadow. It started speaking.
”To find your ancient treasure, follow the path of DOOM!”
What was that supposed to mean?
Suddenly the ground opened up before me. Was this the doom the shadow was talking about?
EMILY – YEAR 6
Hi Emily,
I really enjoyed your story, although I am worried that the ‘Path of Doom’ is not going to lead to a happy ending!
Well done, for hooking me in with your opening line. The mine is a great setting for those prompt words.
Michelle, Team 100wc,
Melbourne, Australia