HUNTER SEARCHES FOR A VIOLA.
Gold, Viola, Searched, Lost, Ancient
As we SEARCHED for the ANCIENT, LOST VIOLA, it was nowhere to be found. So we kept looking until we found a suspicious tree hut that was in the middle of nowhere. It had a GOLD door handle that fell off when we tried to open it.
The door magically opened and we walked inside. The first step I took, I stepped onto a trap door and fell down into a dungeon. I shouted at my mates not to walk onto it but it was too late.
We’re stuck and it doesn’t look like we are going to get out.
HUNTER = YEAR 7
Hi Hunter, we liked that you used descriptive words and you can picture where it is happening. I wonder what’s going to happen?
Thank you, Jane.
I was wondering when you said “We liked that you used descriptive words” Who is we?
Are you a teacher? Because I would love to reply back on one of your blogs if you have any.
Anyway, thank you.
– Hunter