LACHLAN’S 100WC
Sweat trickled down my chest, my mind flickered with images of a VIOLA operating by itself. My mind was absolutely LOST.
It was Monday, the first day of term at my new High School. My feet pulverised on the asphalt, little did I recognise that there was a van steadily approaching me. At the edge of my peripheral vision, I saw the van appear. On the surface, it said in GOLD letters, ANCIENT violas for sale.
I SEARCHED my mind for a logical explanation, This couldn’t be happening!
Slowly the atmosphere tightened its grasp around me, and I couldn’t breathe.
LACHLAN – YEAR 8
Hello Lachlan,
As soon as I read the first sentence you hooked me in! I really like your vocabulary it was super interesting. Your piece was super interesting and if it was longer I would keep reading it.
Good job
Masha