MAISY AND HER FAMILY VISIT THE ZOO.
…then the Elephant delivered his speech…
Gradually making my way through the zoo gates with my children, their sweaty hands are grasped in mine.
“ Ready to have an adventure?” I say in an excited tone. We decided to stop by the shop.
Ella asked eagerly “ Can we buy giraffe food?” With gleaming smiles on both our faces I said yes, and made our way over.
After seeing the giraffes we went to the elephants. When reaching them, we arrived at feeding time, then the elephant gave his speech. He started talking about all the different types of elephants. It was a very educational visit to the zoo.
MAISY – YEAR 8
Hi my name is Macy. I love your story, I think it was kind of a realistic story and I like the picture you put there. I wish there could have been more speech but your story was great over all.
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