BROKEN DOWN ON A FROZEN LAKE = MAISIE
Wind rushed around us, as my friend Deer, the Polar Bear, helped me push my car out of the frozen lake. It had frozen into the lake overnight when I had fallen asleep in my car.
Deer was as strong as strength, strong as a Gorilla. He was basically doing all the work, when my car suddenly started. It burst into a powerful roar.
I knew that I had to get off the ice before it started to melt from the heat from my exhaust pipe. Then it stopped.
I hopped back out of my car and started to push.
MAISIE = YEAR 7
Hi Masie,
It made me smile to see that the polar bear was called Deer! What a great friend to have, especially out in the snow.
Great description too.
Well done,
Michelle, Team 100wc,
Melbourne, Australia