HERE’S JOEL WITH HIS 100 WC.
John agreed to take me on his exciting adventure of the arctic. Driving through thick fog I feel anxious.
“John, Stop!” I yell.
Too late we crash into a gigantic boulder covered in thick snow… I wake and see a huge polar bear shaking the car.
I scream.
“John drive, get away from this bear!”
“Calm down he won’t attack.”
I don’t listen. I grab a bag and leap out of the car. Rummaging through it I find cans and hurl them at the bear. This is a mistake. It charges me. Still screaming I sprint off into the fog.
JOEL = YEAR 6
Wow! What an exciting story, but your protagonist (the lead character) should have listened to John and stayed in the truck. Running from a polar bear… I don’t think this story is going to have a happy ending. Hopefully your imagination is better than mine and you can think of some way that he can escape.