OLIVIA MET A POLAR BEAR.
“Uh oh,” I whisper under my icy cold breath when I see a huge polar bear leaning against my snow covered car.
I stand there, staring at the creature for a while before I pluck up the courage to wander over there.
The white snow crunches under my shoes as I get closer to the bear. I can hear the bear growling with fright and at the same time, excitement.
I get into my car as quick as I can, and immediately start the car up.
The creature instantly runs away upon hearing the roaring of my car’s cold engine.
OLIVIA = YEAR 8
Hi Olivia
Thank you for a well written and interesting little piece. I think you have done an excellent job with the opening and have easily kept up the quality in your work. I’ll bet you were pleased when the bear ran from the roar of your engine!