Use the word PHENOMENAL in 100 Word Challenge.
… phenomenal…
My dad had only told tales of the lost treasures in his books.
We used to joke about actually finding the phenomenal treasures, it was our dream. Until one day my father went missing. People looked day and night but he never ended up getting found.
So I decided to carry out our dream and go looking for a specific treasure that was read in one of my favourite tales, ‘Lost Gold’.
In the book it had a map. I searched everywhere for this treasure. Only ending up with the same result every time.
“I couldn’t give up, not yet”
Holly – Year 8
Kia ora Holly – no don’t give up! That is especially true of your writing which is getting better all the time. I love that you are trying new things in your writing and doing so much of it in your own time. Try to add detail by using interesting words – extending your vocabulary.
Ms M #100WC
Hello Holly,
A quest for a phenomenal treasure?
Throughout history there have been many stories of those looking for lost treasure including cities of gold, pirate treasure or riches in the ground. Your story shows the potential of being a another great adventure. Well done.
Ross Mannell (Team 100WC)
Teacher (retired), N.S.W., Australia