A life and death choice from Dave.
Walking through the mysterious underpass my friend Johnny and I come across a mysterious beam of light. This was not the trip I was expecting in Australia, I feel we are being watched.
“I’ve been expecting you two,” says a familiar voice.
“Who’s there?” I ask frightened.
It was our missing friend Mike. He had been missing for 2 weeks ever since we had a debate about the legendary Vegemite and Marmite.
“If you want to get out alive, you must eat this Vegemite,” says Mike with vengeance.
“No,” he said,” I like MARMITE.,” says Johnny with a confident smile.
Hello Dave, this is a very creative piece. I like how you have made it into a bit of a “thriller”. I wonder what will happen? Well done.
Dear Dave,
I really like how your story flows, and how one character likes marmite, but the other character like Vegemite.
Devi
Grade 5, USA