Dave describes a flying creature.
Sailing across the uncharted waters, wind fills the sails and the aroma of the salty water takes over my sense of smell. Suddenly something catches my attention, the crew and I are astonished by the new discovery. I didn’t realise they could fly!
It seems that there is more to this world than I thought.
It has a body of a fish and webbed like wings. What should we call this extraordinary speciman? A bird fish, a dragonfish?
No, I shall call it a flying fish. Who knows what other mysteries lie down hidden in the depths of the unknown?
Dear Dave,
I like the story that you wrote, and how you incorporated the prompt into your story. As well as how your story flows together. Keep up the good work.
Devi,
Grade 5, IL, U.S.A.