DAVE HAS WRITTEN ANOTHER STUNNER!
I haven’t eaten since this morning so I hope to find some food.
All of a sudden I come across something I thought I’d never see again. I FOUND A BANANA!
I quickly rushed to it and devoured it.
With a bit of energy restored, I scavenge for more food. I come across a black heavy piece of metal. It was pretty damaged, but I managed and jumped over it. With a bag full of food I wander out.
I am stopped in my tracks when I hear the most disturbing sound on Earth. Heavy artillery striking fear into me.
Hi Dave! Loved your story! I liked how you had found food which is good because you didn’t eat in a long time but then you almost had artillery strike on you.
Hi Dave, and thanks for this great 100WC piece. I liked the immediate, straight into the action feel of it and the sudden shock of sound as the Heavy Artillery opens up. Really exciting piece, well done.