TIME FOR ANOTHER 100WC FROM JOE.
The sun was setting fast. Soon it would be too dark to see. There was an old, rotten tree, its branches stretching across the sun.
I wondered how long it had been there when my thoughts got interrupted by a loud sound. It was distant but familiar.
It was getting louder and louder every second. Soon I could make out a dark vehicle. After a while, the truck stopped and the driver said, ”you want a lift? “
“Yes please!” I say.
“You’re lucky I found you, there’s a big storm coming. I don’t reckon anyone would survive it out here.”
Nice Joe!
What a wonderful story it really hooked me in and I love your punctuation. I liked how you said your thoughts got interrupted. Great piece of writing keep it up.
– Hunter.
Hi Joe,
I really liked your story! I wanted to keep reading. I have been taught that I should never take a ride from a stranger. I guess he did since there was a storm coming. Who was the guy? What made you come up with this story?
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