ARABELLA HAD TO RUN!
In The Forest
There I was alone in the forbidden forest.
I walked through the forest wondering how to get out as I had lost my way. I was frightened because of the growling I heard. That’s when I knew I should run, as there was a huge moose about to charge.
I ran but not how I should have, I ran straight, not in zig zags.
Now I lie here in the hospital with a dislocated knee, broken thumb and a broken arm. I have to stay in this hospital. Now I have learnt my lesson, not to run away from home.
ARABELLA – YEAR 6
Hi Arabella, I really enjoyed reading your story. You have used great descriptive words. It was a great dramatic and you used a great hook. Well done keep it up! Thanks Annabel
Hi Arabella,
You did great work. Your story is well structured and grammar properly used.
Keep writing and inspiring others to write.
Miss Milena, a teacher at BIS Belgrade