THE PROMPT IS ‘BUT WHERE DID SHE GO?’
The deep and gloomy forest was left in complete darkness when the moon was perfectly aligned behind the oak trees.
My heart’s missing all the beats and my friends look frightened.
Thats when we saw it, a tall mangled looking figure, standing alone past some trees.
We thought nothing of it and paid more attention to our photography pictures, when a girl scarecrow appeared in our perfect shot.
“What is that?” called Allie trembling on the spot. “I’M COMING FOR YOU ALLIE!”
Then it completely disappeared.
“But…where did she go?” Allie shouted.
Thats when we felt breathing behind us…
RYIA = YEAR 8
Hi Ryia –
You took this week’s prompt in a very creepy direction, which is exactly what I would have done. In fact, the picture I shared with my students was very similar to the one you chose. I’m impressed by your carefully selected word choice that sets the ominous tone: “deep and gloomy forest,” “my heart’s missing all the beats,” and “tall, mangled figure,” to draw attention to a few. I can almost hear the foreboding background music warning the girls to run. Thanks for entertaining me with your spine-tingling 100WC.
Keep on writing!
Mrs. Rombach – Team 100WC
8th Grade English & Communications Teacher from Virginia, USA
http://blogs.lcps.org/rombachravenrockstars/
P.S. – Last year, we participated in the Student Blogging Challenge, too. I sure hope it returns next year.
hi Riya,
I really liked your description of the forest. I tried to think of something to improve, but I couldn’t. Well done!
Jakob