WHAT TO WRITE? ASKS HOLLY.
Opening the classroom door, the air felt heavy. There was a different vibe, the look on the faces of my classmates so bland, as if their souls had been sucked from them.
I looked at the whiteboard. Ugh! We had a test!
I felt like I had run into a brick wall with the word karma written all over it.
After mentioning a test yesterday, I’m thinking, this is fate.
Mrs. Smith handed out the test, I was overflowing with nerves. With the click of my pen it was time to start, so, what will I write on this page?
Holly = Year 8
Hi Holly,
this is a really well written story. You have used excellent vocabulary and evoked the feeling in the classroom really well.
I really enjoyed your story.
Well done.
Ms Brennock
Team 100 w/c
Dublin
Ireland
https://msbrennocksclass.100wc.net/