JORJA AND THE LIONS – 100 WORD CHALLENGE
My friend Jane and I were in the woods. I heard them before I saw them. Suddenly there standing in front of us, a whole pride of lions.
“What do we do?” I whisper to Jane.
“Don’t RUN!” Jane replied.
I run off. “No! I said don’t run.” Jane shouted.
By then all the lions were chasing her.
“WHAT DO I DO NOW?” I shout out, but by then they had taken me to the ground. Jane fell down and started crying. Then she began to laugh, looking up, and there they were, the lions licking her.
It was extraordinary.
Nice little twist at the end!
Hi Jorja,
I really like that way that you have used changes in font to emphasise certain parts of the story. The bold is really effective.Very appropriate topic choice with the re-release of Lion King.
Keep up the great writing.
Mrs Horan
Team 100WC
Morrinsville, New Zealand.